None more poetic…
There is none more poetic than her
A southern star,
She eclipses even the northern lights.
Of honeyed laughter and soft smiles
This dusky beauty beguiles.
Bewitching charcoal eyes.
She is a living prize.
My heart doth meet
Dainty feet.
Crimson toe tips
Swaying hips.
Silken swept raven tresses
Boldly clad sari emerald dress
Mesmerizing, concealing, revealing.
Ah, her dancing choli knots
On that sculpted shape renders me fraught.
Her lips, oh her luscious lips
She excites, delights and ignites.
No Jezebel or Delilah is she
Naïve and virtuous, she is.
No Helen of Troy, is she
My Joy, she is.
She is the harp that eases me soft.
She is the drums that hastens my heart to thump,
The symphony that awakens my poetic soul.
She fills my heart and renders me whole.
An inspiration by Anup Gomay’s painting (main image) “Tying the Knot”.
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Well…i am truly enamoured by your words … gorgeous and so evocative 💜
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Thank you my Fiery Friend. I have that painting at home. 😋
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The depth and sensuality of the words so fitting to the picture. Intoxicating! Beautifully written!
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Thank you Kevin for reading and for the response 😊Anup Gomay is an amazing artist and an inspiration.
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And you did well to put the painting into verse!
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💐
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Wow! Beautifully penned!!
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Thank you my friend. 🌺
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Thank you for the reblog.
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Reblogged this on Ben Naga.
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Thank you for the reblog. 💐
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She sounds so desirable haha. Great stuff!
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She does. Anups paintings come alive. 😊
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Awesome writing
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Thank you my friend. I send warm regards from Sunshiny South Africa.
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Dainty feet and charcoal eyes. I am in love
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💖Ps Drew,
Choli refers to her blouse, those knots are all the rage… 😊
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Lol. 😊
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love this.the picture brought back teenage day dreams.
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🙂💐
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Love this picture. Thank you for sharing.
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So perfect for the painting! 💕💕
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The story Val, behind the painting is that, she is off to meet her lover snd the bird is asking her to re consider.
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I love it!!!!
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What a lovely and beautiful poem about a woman who truly inspires the one who loves her.
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Thank you. I love this painting and now the words just makes it all the more vivid and alive to me. 💐🌺
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Wow..simply beautiful in every way.
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Thank you Devinder. Saris are just the best and she is lovely .
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Beautiful poem. I can see the scene vividly.
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Thank you, i loved your posts on family.
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Thanks and your blog is well done and written. I will read more posts.
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Thank you, i thought the same of yours and appreciated your post on Depression. 💐
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You have a way with words, Kavitha!
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Ah Sarah, it just spills out. My Mother always said I talk too much but my Father always smiled at everything I said, irrespective of how daring it was 🙂
Thank you for visiting Sarah.
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No hay nadie más poético que ella.
Una estrella del sur,
Ella eclipsa incluso la aurora boreal.
De risas melosas y sonrisas suaves.
Esta belleza oscura seduce.
Hechiceros ojos de carbón.
Ella es un premio vivo.
Mi corazon se encuentra
Pies delicados.
Puntas de dedo carmesí
Balanceándose las caderas.
Trenzas de seda barridas de cuervo
Vestido de esmeralda sari audazmente vestido
Hipnotizando, ocultando, revelando.
Ah, sus nudos choli bailando.
En esa forma esculpida me pone tenso.
Sus labios, oh sus deliciosos labios.
Ella excita, deleita y enciende.
No Jezabel o Delilah es ella
Ella es ingenua y virtuosa.
No Helen de Troya, ¿es ella?
Mi Alegría, ella es.
Ella es el arpa que me suaviza.
Ella es la batería que apresura mi corazón,
La sinfonía que despierta mi alma poética.
Ella llena mi corazón y me completa.
Hqy versos preciosos…por ejemplo, esa arpa que suaviza. Una maravilla. Cierro los ojos y la puedo ver.
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Ah…. Sounds SO much better, the words are stumbling out of my mouth, i can only imagine how you would say it. 🤗😊💖💖
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Beautiful
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Reblogged this on Dracul Van Helsing and commented:
A very beautiful and lovely poem.
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Thank you… Im honored. 🌺🌸💖
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Very well written!
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Thank you💐
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Beautifully penned 🙂
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Thank you. 💐
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Like you, but with the voice of a man 😂😂😂😂
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😊😋
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she is northern girl actress in tamil movies 🙂 not southern girl..but your words are beaitoful
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There are bits of her here in South Africa. Thats what made it all the more poetic. 😊
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oh I see,,, thats good..and you wrote in the persepective of Indian actress i mean southern indian actresses or african actresses haha..im curious to know..cos i took in a way that it was written with in mind of our southern beauties
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That’s wonderful!
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, 💐
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🌺🌸 🌷
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I bow to a master of poetry. Your imagery, your phrasing, all a poetic perfection. Thank you so much for posting.
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Thank you Barbara, you are generous with your praise. She is so beautiful, the words just flowed. 💐🌸🌺
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Wonderfully written. You have taken a poetic medium to repaint, a word at a time, a readable rendition of a beautiful painting. Thank you for sharing a stunning portrait and an amazing poem.🙏🙏
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My long love for that pictures has come through. My late Dad would have loved and appreciated it as i do. He was a connoisseur of Eastern beauty. Thank you for visiting, you are always welcome to visit. 💐🌸🌺
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
A POETIC “HUBBA-HUBBA”!
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